可怜的饿呀，没得人理呀，天地良心呀，我只是想看看饿水平呀
When it comes to question that what people should focus on, the discussion of this issue among individuals and in society as a whole has come into vogue during the last few years. Against the same background, however, what stands out between the two peoples is the angles from which they see things. The complex nature of the above matter requires us to consider it on case-by-case basis. From personal perspective, whether one has advantages over the other depends on the specific circumstances, and I am convinced that wide and spread understanding of the world around oneself is a perfect complement to concentration one's daily life. The significance of this operation is embodied in the following respects.The orientation towards success of the individual and the community appears to reflect the sacrifices and attention a person paid. Everything is inherently linked to one other, more or less. And the results of the problem maybe make a great contribution to solution of another matter. Don't you gain the viewpoint that a butterfly that flutters its wings and cause a hurricane on the other side of the world? The links and bands, you don't see, nevertheless, are actually and definitely existed. For example, the antiwar movies raise the question that is every wars to uphold the justice and is it worthy that an individuals sacrifices to his country and at the same time ignore his own family or his personal value, that greatly prevent the process of the war to the third world war .
Moreover, not only is this operation pragmatic and mature, but also periscopic and impassioned. The reason is not far to seek: the things around one offer the opportunities to discover and further understand ourselves and the world. The oceans of the information and cases outside your own supporting system might be tremendous shaken and surprise to you, but they would be helpful for you to deepen and broaden the horizons. Learning the arts seems to be meaningless for a student devoted solely to the instruction in the down- to-earth practical matters, such as physical, chemical and biological problems, nevertheless, the arts thought to be thought-provoking tools for learning and researching, which allow us to deal with difficultly, complexity and ambiguity, to treat various situations flexibly, and to form imagination and creative responses.
Admittedly, as a proverb says: "one coin has two sides!" There is no denying that there are a couple of disadvantages of distracting attention on so many events that one cannot concentrate on the primary and dominant duties and is confused by the complication. However, this alone does not constitute a sufficient support to cast aside to standpoint that pay much attention to the matters happening around us And the advantages are more obvious. So the argument can be rational managed and balanced.
Consequently, judging from the compelling evidences provided, it should be safe to draw the conclusion that is s dispensable and vital for us to know the events happing around the world. 我看了．．．我也不专业．．．我作文都还在给别人改．．．也不能给你好的建议．．．
我觉得用词和句式都很不错．．尤其是句式用的很多．．蛮不错的
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非常感谢，在寄托上被前辈给改过了，很是震撼，人真的是要听听别人的评价才知道真实的感受！...
一看就知道用了好多套话,万能语句,是托福作文么?老外看多了也会觉得腻的...页:
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