Issuse 31,第一次写,望指教
TOPIC: ISSUE31 - "Money spent on research is almost always a good investment, even when the results of that research are controversial."[font=Times New Roman]The speaker asserts the viewpoint that even if the results of the research are controversial, it is still as well as always a sensible investment to spend the money on the research. I, with respect to that viewpoint, regard as overstate and take exceptions to some extent.[/font]
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Admittedly, researches, in a myriad of fields, do contribute to the elevation of quality of people's daily life being attached the greatest importance. With the outgrowth of the internet, cell phones in realm of telecommunication and the fruition of airplane, subway, magnetic-elevated trains and most frequently-used automobiles in domain of transportation, people do enjoy the convenience and cozy feeling brought by the mass media and mass transportation. Under the concept of earth village, fufilled by the research of the telecom, more opportunities to travel abroad, get informed from the friends several kilos away are available. The grand ambition to explore outer space, deeply ingrained in our mind, exerts a tremendous influence on arousing people's curiosity to be more acquainted with the complete and mystic cosmos. A serials of successful steps to explore outer space, such as moon landing, operation of space station, exertion of Hubble telescope and Mars spacecraft explore, lead human beings to understand more about the cosmos which breeds the earth and provides infinite space and time for us to delve and develop. Likely, thanks to the persistent research and probe, people are likely to evade the unpredictable havoc and nurture civilization more magnificent and glorious on other planets.[/font]
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Money invested on the research is indeed rewarding, pressing and even imperative due to the current situation that people are still inflicted by the uncurable diseases like AIDS, cancer, diabetes and etc, harmed by the hardly-predictable natural disasters such as tornado, earthquake, volcano eruption, trapped in the chasm of economic destitution, right deprivation, social discrimination. As the Chinese proverb says: much still remains to be done, perfectly signifys the situation confronted with the research.. Genetic engineering ,still under research, forsees peerless value owing to its incomparable effect conducive to eliminate the worldwide problem of famine and starvation by ameliorate the agricultural production, to cure diseases at DNA level in the way of gene therapy. Yet, inspiring and exciting effecacy mentioned above establishes completely on the grounds that people can totally master the discipline of genetic engineering. hereby, more money, enthusiasm, techniques need to be put into that far-reaching and seminal project.[/font]
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[font=Times New Roman]Nevertheless, authorities have the obligation to censor and appraise the research with the spirit of fairness and equity for the sake of guaranteeing the smooth advance of the research , thwarting the baleful intention and devastating the vicious consequences. As we all know, research like Clone, features the ambiguous outcome far beyond people’s judgement. People are divided into parts favor and against both with distinct perspectives and illustrations. The supports asserts that by clone technique, our healthy body parts can be cloned and reserved, serving as the substitues for the counterpart when they defunction, while the opposite side claims that Clone defies human ethics and morality because of the demeanor of devaluing human life, if utilized by the hideous persons, the consequences will be unimaginable and devastating. Thus, the governmental intervention and censor server as the crucial role. Taking the ostensibly-sublime goal of medical research, focusing on knowing about the essence of pathology, particularly the human structure and organism, the Japanese invaders take the innocent Chinese people as experimental target , conducting brutal and inhumane vivisection during world war 2. The example mentioned above can fully pose the fact: without regulation and supervision on the research, the outgrowth is likely to be astray from the path merely anticipated by the majority of people.[/font]
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In conclusion, research resembles the two-edged sword. When the positive side shines, it makes contribution to the affluence, prosperity and development of the society, undoubtedly, fear, chaos and desolation will suffuse when the negative side prevails. So, let's thrive to keep the research directing on the way of benefiting the whole world.[/font]
[[i] 本帖最后由 mcolinc 于 2008-7-4 23:57 编辑 [/i]] [font=Times New Roman][color=blue]LZ 帮侬改下开篇[/color]
[/font][font=Times New Roman]The speaker asserts[u] the viewpoint（[color=blue]去掉[/color]）[/u] that [u]even if the results of the research are controversial[/u]（[color=blue]语序上放到后面比较舒服，否则这句话的头太大了[/color]）, it is still [u]as well[/u] （[color=blue]这个短语一般只放后面[/color]）as always a sensible investment to spend the money（[color=blue]money 一般名词一般概念，习惯用零冠词[/color]） on the research. I, with respect to that viewpoint（[color=blue]这是开篇的大忌讳！ Don not be humble! ur tone should be as sound as your argument!),[/color] regard as overstate and take exceptions to some extent( [color=blue]后面这句怎么了？ fragmented sentence 阿[/color]~）.[/font]
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[font=Times New Roman][color=blue]中心思想表达的太含蓄了~[/color][/font]
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[font=Times New Roman][color=#0000ff]对不起了，LZ 偶改文章总是很狠的~~ 不过，是相信这是对你有益才大胆的来的::91 [/color][/font]
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