通宵吐血处女作---issue212，请各位指教
212."If a goal is worthy, then any means taken to attain it is justifiable."According to the speaker, one can take any means to realize his goal as long as it is worthy. As far as I am concerned, I agree that people should try their best to realize a goal which is worthy to them. However, I disagree the viewpoint that any means are allowed to be taken. We should just take the proper means rather than any means to attain the worthy goal.
A goal, towards which effort is directed, indicates the specific way to endeavor. For instance, a student who aims to become a astronomer, would choose a major relate to astronomy and do considerable research on it so as to attain his goal. On the contrary, without a worthy goal, any means would be useless since people don't know in which way to exert their ability. The human society is exactly developing step by step through realizing worthy goals one by one.
Undoubtedly, a worthy goal directs us which aspects to strive toward.
Nevertheless, no matter how worthy the goal is, one cannot attain it by any means beyond the range of moral values, laws, and science. In the process of obtaining his goals, Hitler, a renowned political leader, who aimed to make Germany stronger, launched World War II in which many innocent people were killed. Although Hitler did have a great goal, the means he took which against the moral values are far from justifiable. Thus, those means which break the moral values, laws and science cannot be defined as justifiable.
Last but not the least, the speaker's point of view may be too much self-confidence without considering the possible serious result induced by means. Since Mankind's knowledge and ability is limited, any means may cause unpredictable effects opposite to the original intension. It is known to all that outer space exploration plays an important role in developing the science and technology, however, a disaster may take place such as the Spaceship Columbia Accident and space garbage which may drop down on the earth. Thus, having paid more and more attention to the safety problem, NASA is now taking necessary measures to prevent the possible accident. The case above warns us that we should take proper means rather than any means when achieving a worthy goal.
In a word, due to analysis and reasons mentioned above, the speaker's viewpoint is unilateral. We should consider deeply that whether the mean would bring us unpredictable lose that is opposite to our original porpose. Only proper means can be regard as justifiable when achieving a worthy goal.
今天通宵到5点，快趴下了::18
请各位G友不吝赐教下吧:loveliness:
[[i] 本帖最后由 mymuro 于 2009-2-2 12:06 编辑 [/i]] 顶吖::z1 我第一次也是写这篇，我语法不好，看了下LZ的逻辑结构，还是蛮好的哈，语言也比我好多了。。。
帮你顶一下吧，也给不出什么好意见，不好意思啊 我也只能顶一下了 打捞一下::z8 只是来顶walcott的 还有老俞用flashget也无法download.. ::51
是不是...LZ是北航、南航的学生....所以举的例子关于航天的比较多……一开始的考航天学校到后来的NASA.....
弱弱的说一下 我用IE下了4%....不懂了 老俞啊老俞 [quote]原帖由 [i]beyonder0[/i] 于 2009-2-21 17:49 发表 [url=http://www.taisha.org/bbs/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=13265677&ptid=1140794][img]http://www.taisha.org/bbs/images/common/back.gif[/img][/url]
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是不是...LZ是北航、南航的学生....所以举的例子关于航天的比较多……一开始的考航天学校到后来的NASA.....
弱弱的说一下 我用IE下了4%....不懂了 老俞啊老俞 [/quote]
用flashget 1.96以前的版本吧
要不用internet download manager也行:loveliness:
PS:在下只是对航天比较有兴趣，所以才希望去美国，尽管不是这个major::z8
稍微修改了一下，还请各位指点
212."If a goal is worthy, then any means taken to attain it is justifiable."According to the speaker, one can take any means to realize his goal as long as it is
worthy. As far as I am concerned, I agree that people should try their best to realize a
goal which is worthy to them. However, I disagree the viewpoint that any means are allowed
to be taken. We should just take the proper means rather than any means to attain the worthy
goal.
A goal, towards which effort is directed, indicates the specific way to endeavor. For
instance, a student who aims to become a astronomer, would choose a major relate（d） to
astronomy and do considerable research（es） on it so as to attain his goal. On the
contrary, without a worthy goal, any means would be useless since people don't know in which
way to exert their ability. The human society is exactly developing step by step through
realizing worthy goals one by one.Undoubtedly, a worthy goal directs us which aspects to
strive toward.
Nevertheless, no matter how worthy the goal is, one cannot attain it by any means beyond the
range of moral values, laws, and science. In the process of obtaining his goals, Hitler, a
renowned political leader, who aimed to make Germany stronger, launched World War II in
which many(改为大体数字？) innocent people were killed. Although Hitler did have a great
goal, the means he took which against the moral values are far from justifiable. Thus, those
means which break the moral values, laws and science cannot be defined as justifiable.
Last but not the least, the speaker's point of view may be too much self-confidence without
considering the possible serious result（s） induced by means. Since Mankind's knowledge and
ability is（are） limited, any means（some means） may cause unpredictable effects opposite
to the original intension. It is known to all that outer space exploration plays an
important role in developing the science and technology, however, a disaster may take place
such as the Spaceship（Space shuttle航天飞机） Columbia Accident and space garbage which may
drop down on the earth. Thus, having paid more and more attention to the safety problem,
NASA is now taking necessary measures to prevent the possible accident. The case above warns
us that we should take proper means rather than any means when（while？） achieving a worthy
goal.
In a word, due to analysis and reasons mentioned above, the speaker's viewpoint is
unilateral. We should consider deeply that whether the mean would bring us unpredictable
lose that is opposite to our original porpose（purpose？）. Only proper means can be regard
as justifiable when achieving a worthy goal.
PS
我是北航的学生……页:
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