TPO写作牛人范文～TPO1-18全套综合写作满分范文【附写作模板】
版里TPO很热闹我也来凑个热闹，刚去了那个TPO达人的博客，看到有不少TPO的综合写作和独立写作的范文，还附带模板，最新的TPO15的都有了，转载过来，大家可以写完对照一下。不然写作题目做了总是没答案很不爽啊。。。[color=#fff][size=0px]; [/size][/color][color=#fff][size=0px][/size][/color]
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地址是[url=http://toeflblog.net/archives/category/writing-sample-answers]http://toeflblog.net/archives/category/writing-sample-answers[/url]
我比较欣赏的是TPO9和13两篇，看了以后茅塞顿开啊。。。贴出来大家围观下
[b][font=Arial][size=4]Sample answer for TPO9 Integrated writing task
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[color=#000000][size=3]The lecturer points out several problems with the use of hydrogen-based fuel-cell engines in support of her claim that substituting them for internal-combustion engines is technologically unfeasible, environmentally unfriendly, and economically unviable.
First, the lecturer states that it is impractical to replace internal-combustion engines with fuel-cell engines because using the latter requires hydrogen in a pure liquid form, which is technologically challenging to both obtain and store. However, the reading argues that because hydrogen can be extracted from many resources including water, fuel cell engines powered by this infinite source of energy is an extremely attractive alternative.
Second, the lecturer refutes the claim in the reading that hydrogen cells are environmentally friendly. She argues that although engines that use hydrogen cells produce less pollution, the manufacturing of hydrogen cells generates large amounts of harmful by-products due to the burning of fossil fuels in the purification process.
Third, although the reading suggests that hydrogen-based engines are more fuel-efficient and thus economically competitive than internal-combustion engines, the professor argues that such an advantage is undermined by the fact that fuel-cell engines are extremely expensive to manufacture because they require the addition of platinum, a very rare and expensive material.
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[font=Arial][size=10pt][size=4]The lecturer does not agree with the first point made in the reading—that private collectors keep their fossil collections away from the public. She contends that the commercial trading of fossils actually makes them available to a wider public, because everyone with a budget, such as private schools and libraries, can purchase them for study and exhibition.[/size][/size][/font]
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[font=Arial][size=10pt][size=4]The lecturer goes on to refute the claim in the reading that fossil trading business prevents scientists and public museums from benefiting from fossil finds, as these parties cannot compete with wealthy private buyers to acquire important fossils for research purpose. On the contrary, she argues, scientists themselves are the first to evaluate any important fossil before it can be sold in the commercial market at a price, so the academic community does not miss any opportunity to study privately traded fossils.[/size][/size][/font]
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[font=Arial][size=10pt][size=4]Additionally, the lecturer challenges the final downside of fossil trading mentioned in the reading. The lecturer reminds us that the damages, if any, caused by private collectors in their field operations are more than offset by the effort these individuals have made to increase the number of fossils available to the public that would otherwise remain undiscovered.[/size][/size][/font]
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[[i] 本帖最后由 choppings 于 2010-11-2 18:25 编辑 [/i]] 谢谢分享！ 希望能有更多范文推出啊
什么叫范文？
啊？ 用一般现在时吗？ 再顶楼主 很好的材料啊 再顶一个～：） 这个博客我喜欢～～ 好像是不错唉 ::11 ::z1 ::z2 ::z5 :loveliness: 确实不错 值得收藏 字数这么少的范文啊::11 这范文缺少很多细节啊 是不是太概括了 看看 是短了点啊 不过还是达到字数要求了 最新添加了模板，可以借鉴哦 最新添加了模板，可以借鉴哦 顶起 必须的！ 好模板的模板啊。。。不知道这个合不合ETS的口味。。。不过我自己的模板也差不多。。。 呵呵 模板用的好才行啊 [quote]原帖由 [i]choppings[/i] 于 2010-5-5 00:12 发表 [url=http://bbs.taisha.org/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=17699933&ptid=1619017][img]http://bbs.taisha.org/images/common/back.gif[/img][/url]呵呵 模板用的好才行啊 [/quote]同意 TPO写作牛人范文～独立写作和综合写作都有，【附写作模板】 模板？ 谢谢 谢谢！ 听的懂，一一对应，才是重点。 同意LS 还不错哦 顶一个::16 顶一个！ 谢谢分享！