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tesolchina 发表于 2008-1-16 20:39

北美范文的破题策略（完整下载版）

[size=6][color=blue][b]我也懒得续来续去的，一次放在附件里，是我总结的十一种破题策略，希望对大家有帮助。祝大家新春快乐哈～～[/b][/color][/size]
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很多人都会问，《北美范文》该如何使用。我认为可以从两方面入手：一是重点看每篇范A!_9a(wO:j*^
文的第一段，学习范文的破题策略；二是对范文中精彩的句子和词汇进行模仿和使用。只
'p ^*b7o2i id2C%Z 要坚持做这两项工作，半年内，写作能力必有显著提高。
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破题策略一：基本同意，细节有异议
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p c,D?l-u[E7V8e 原则上同意作者观点，但观点涉及到具体问题时有保留。结构上，先肯定大的原则，然后
g9KQ.g8PWmv3~ 具体讨论那些情况下会有问题。这种策略适合的问题往往有一个大的框架，又有一些特殊&_O.v'`X/`b,}
的个案。这种策略就是很多参考书都提到的平衡观点，是最常见的一种策略。优点在于层9hI.I6O'fi2On9]
次比较简单明了，缺点则是不容易写出特色。A;b2W6rEcO R0I9d
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able. My points of contention with the speaker involve the fundamental objecti
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作者的立论思路是顺应原命题的结构形成的。首先肯定命题前半部分所提出的大前提，然
/L7g5p \6t9Q,W0Qj(G 后对后半部分的特殊情况提出质疑。考生在构思的时候也应该注意观察原命题的结构，从
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SZ?DhTRJ$l or political leaders to withhold information from the public. A contrary view
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must not allow our political leaders undue freedom to with-hold information,
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nderpinnings of any democratic society.
,?MYU%ZWmW0V 在肯定命题的基础上，作者提出需要警惕的极端情况。一方面承认公共政治对适当隐瞒的
)F6J:h;Ihz+m+\ 需求，另一方面又指出过度隐瞒可能对民主基石的威胁。这种对平衡与妥协的把握，恰好
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策略二：分拆命题
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itions to survive and thrive; and (3) cultural traditions are preserved and ge
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的工作需要相当的功底和经验；由于这种分析方法十分有特色，因此很值得读者尝试。 ?+f'nA7EGh.FrD+v
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但通过分拆主题而呈现的框架也很明显。另外，作者还用到另一个重要的策略“语理分析%?Sensk [
”，我们再后面会提及。
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广泛，有助于我们将一个抽象的问题具体化，并建构一个清晰的论证框架。
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ust serve. While this claim has considerable merit with respect to most areas .@A%Z ye6nJm
of human endeavor--including education, art, and politics--I take exception wi
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作者指出命题在教育、艺术和政治等领域有一定道理，而在科研方面却不成立。这样在某
*Y T/b,}eo2U` 些具体方面命题成立，另一些具体方面命题不成立的处理手法，在北美范文中十分常见。A[I`2l7c;].M
这样写可以体现出作者对命题的较深入的思考和对问题复杂性的认识，同时又能够构建一
-Q.@kS'n/b 个清晰的框架，读者应该重点模仿学习。  
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gh risk tolerance and patience invariably achieve more success than conformist
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d in newer industries where markets and technology are in constant flux, confo
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，通过探索其他可能性，来提出新的观点。首先是仪式和典礼的目的除了定义文化，还有
"Gzp6L X*[({ 没有其他；其次是除了仪式和典礼，还有没有其他机制能帮助定义文化。这两个问题的提+{2p!w%g3ExKa%Tx
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cts. When it comes to certain aspect of our personal lives, and to historical
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目中出现fact这类抽象字眼时，我们可以先对它作出具体化的澄清，然后根据对“fact”
~M2m E/Qw6I?(E 的几种不同的理解，而形成一个论证框架。这是一个非常有效的解题方法，应该引起读者
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problem of defining effective leadership in the first place. In addressing the
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business, political, and social-spiritual.
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作者认为问题很复杂是因为一个关键的概念领导人效率不好定义。接下来，作者提出领导
7HrR(~'^F]!V 才能的三种不同的形式，并在具体场景下讨论概念的定义问题。因此，这个分析同时用到
4K)Gk+j%_d|Q 了具体情况具体分析和引用新概念这两种策略。  :loveliness:
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hide的魂 发表于 2008-1-16 20:56

呵呵，支持老师的更新~~~

JojoGemini 发表于 2008-1-17 10:46

LZ写的很有意境， 搬个板凳跟连载。说啥这作文分儿也要提上去！！！::97 ::97 ::97 ::97

vichord 发表于 2008-1-17 13:41

支持LZ。
'?*M@E6Vq"Olv 总结是最有用的。

yangsoft 发表于 2008-1-17 14:01

我很同意这样得分类，不过我只分出六类来::z2

wylk 发表于 2008-1-17 14:01

thanks

samanthayang 发表于 2008-1-19 15:13

老师太帅了！！

lester.yt 发表于 2008-1-23 22:10

支持老师！

Paper2B 发表于 2008-1-24 10:40

支持老师！

gaaralyn 发表于 2008-1-24 16:11

支持老师！支持老师！

sarasweet 发表于 2008-2-1 13:36

谢谢！～～

Alasdair 发表于 2008-2-1 16:13

先re后看
yC#`OH"C1h 慢慢学习 呵呵

lukeliang 发表于 2008-2-4 11:04

ding~好方法

lukeliang 发表于 2008-2-4 11:05

期待第二篇

asprine_h 发表于 2008-2-8 21:56

看了几天的北美范文，感觉嗯。。。lz很有道理，强人啊

SunShine1029 发表于 2008-2-8 23:34

等待后续~~~

海棠一生 发表于 2008-2-9 11:03

LZ写的很有启发性呢。。。。期待接下来的十种

airia 发表于 2008-2-9 23:47

不得不赞啊~~

dimitriyu 发表于 2008-2-10 09:51

很有收获哦~~~

bunaishi 发表于 2008-2-10 16:01

先顶后看~~

peach_423 发表于 2008-2-10 18:50

内什么，一定要半年么……
9?[;\]l)MQ ::z8

sesame0415 发表于 2008-2-10 19:15

喵~我也米有半年了。。。扳手之都都能数过来
d%],H~PW 期待楼主的后十！！！

fibundle 发表于 2008-2-10 21:46

my practise

"If people disregard the great works of the past, it is because these works no longer answer the needs of the present."
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破题策略一：基本同意，细节有异议y'M8K[$k I"?
I agree with The reason that people disregard the great works of the past is these  works no longer answer the needs of the present. However, the speaker ignore certain compelling  reasons why some types of these work might be disregarded. My points of contention with the speaker involve the fundamental objectives and nature of great work, as discussed below.
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k/e:G~k2l#Aa I agree with the speaker that If people disregard the great works of the past, it is because these works no longer answer the needs of the present. A contrary view would reveal a narrow mind about the worth of great work.... Nevertheless, we must not use usability as only standard to judge great work of past, otherwise, we risk  sanctioning philistinism and understating the aesthetic value of past work.
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8N6M8a5T#y9T%F This statement actually consists of a series of two related claims: (1) great works of the past no longer answer the needs of the present. (2) This is the reason that people disregard them.  While I concede the first claim, whether I agree  with the other claim depends partly on how one defines "people", and what kinds of people like to humble herself to the obscure works of past.
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9il;Zly(`Q)@&T 策略四 探索其他可能性
3l9P9g4Kz? The speaker asserts that The reason that people disregard the great works of the past is these works no longer answer the needs of the present. I agree that the demands of the present is import factor, at least in modern times. However, this is not their sole foctor; nor are needs of the present only standard to evaluate great works.'_;Wh0L@Sv
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Whether the great works of the past are disregarded by people because of failing to answer the needs of the present is a complex issue--one that is tied up in the problem of judgement of work in the first place. In addressing the issue it is helpful to consider, in turn, three distinct aspects for evaluating work of past: usability, asthetics, and social enlightenment.
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xyxlf618 发表于 2008-2-10 21:53

已看，太感谢楼主！！！

pencile_ann 发表于 2008-2-11 21:30

破题真的很重要啊，谢谢老师。

子航 发表于 2008-2-17 18:11

好东西，谢谢

angryyoungman 发表于 2008-2-19 13:04

啥老师啊？？？

dylanoo 发表于 2008-2-19 14:35

很有收获，3.4 号现在issue还不知道该如何下手写；郁闷

fantasyjay1985 发表于 2008-2-19 14:44

谢谢  下了慢慢看

fenghuiok 发表于 2008-2-19 15:50

请问你的这个北美范文是书里的原文吗？如果是，偶就不买书了，呵呵，谢谢

Victsm 发表于 2008-2-20 13:18

回复 1# tesolchina 的贴子

太好了,谢谢分享

carriecuckoo 发表于 2008-2-20 15:15

很受启发，没思路字数就上不去呀

wangjing_coco 发表于 2008-2-21 00:21

谢谢！！！

superycj 发表于 2008-2-21 01:39

顶牛牛了   期待另外的十个.........3KS for sharing::81 ::81

peggylxq 发表于 2008-2-21 11:02

谢谢！学习中~

草草西西 发表于 2008-2-21 11:05

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哈哈，楼主太有才啦。先支持一个~！

peach_423 发表于 2008-2-22 18:52

看看啊~~~~

eva_tang 发表于 2008-2-22 21:09

THANKS

瑛飒 发表于 2008-2-23 02:57

好东西，对破题极有启发*H ?R"J7L}YuV t
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加油！

gtp 发表于 2008-2-23 09:51

回复 24# fibundle 的贴子

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似乎很有用啊!!!

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