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[点滴技巧] 雅思IELTS写作用词需要注意的几大要点实例分析

jackd   发表于 2017-12-7 11:58:33 | 显示全部楼层 | 阅读模式 | 跳转到指定楼层
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% U% l; c& R  x- \; T2 W! U" e   对于参加雅思考试的同学来说,雅思写作是其中比较难得一部分,那么雅思写作用词方面有什么讲究呢?- a( a* I) h+ M, h7 j
   雅思IELTS写作用词需要注意的几大要点
% d' A$ v, W9 b, ]  `  一使用具体的动词
' n3 i! \2 A1 E) Y) U. f/ `  比较具体的描写会让文章看起来更有说服力,分数当然能提高啦!
7 |2 S  R! \' N$ B% `8 z2 V  例如:
9 \; d7 a" i# I! l  1、Poor:My supervisor went past my desk.
. S; a. u8 O7 ?  u/ u; B  Better:My supervisor sauntered (=walked slowly) past my desk.% Y, e! J- M+ m5 f: z
  2、Poor:She is a careful shopper., B6 i4 }$ c1 G( t
  Better:She compares prices and quality.8 a3 J/ `' [* U! D2 h
  二:表语转化为不同的修饰语
9 y& M- P9 `/ G- ^  很多烤鸭不明白什么时候用主动,什么被动!用错了,雅思写作分数自然不高!这样做,也是因为这个原因!: X" d2 g# B6 T% n3 e
  例如:
3 ^, n9 d) W* s; X. F  1、Weak:The organization has been supported by charity.& C, G! h8 Z  W5 @
  Better:Charity has supported the organization.4 N, h$ Y4 S! s( H% i4 Y: _
  2、Weak:The biscuits were stacked on a plate.- C9 s+ o( D5 R7 ~1 u" y
  Better:Mother stacked the biscuits on a plate. 
7 @2 k2 _$ D0 Z" m9 y   三:避免使用语言弱的“be”动词" P5 }7 K/ S3 Y$ r' z, `
  1、在“here”或“there”开头的句子中,把“be”动词后的名词代词变成改写句的主语
1 A2 \4 n* Q1 i0 B+ m7 v+ G  例如:' Y; {) x' R( U! v4 t: ?
  1) Weak:Here are the books you ordered.% K6 @7 J5 R) ~* [1 o, o
  Revision:The books you ordered have arrived.
+ ?( c5 ?! g! K  2) Weak:There is no opportunity for promotion.
  J) I0 C- L1 Y" f  Revision:No opportunity for promotion exists.2 l6 u+ T. T3 e
  2、表语转换为不同的修饰语
; P3 o% x9 O$ o5 L* P  例如:. m4 X  z5 @! L9 u# W
  Weak:The trees are bare. The grass is brown. The landscape seems drab.
3 G( v+ A- }1 w3 S' `  Revision:The brown grass and bare trees form a drab landscape. (转换为前置定语)
* ^: _( g  I* f' ]6 @. f7 s  The landscape, bare and brown, begged for spring green. (转换为并列结构作后置定语)& D# s3 O. d) p! a
  3、作表语用的形容词或名词变为行为动词0 _1 O5 C" q( N$ N# {
  例如:
# V1 F! ?1 I9 G" L) q0 t) [  1) Weak:The team members are good players.
+ L5 F( G! X* B# W, i4 a! M  Revision:The team members play well.
0 d) \7 h" M) ?  2) Weak:One worker's plan is the elimination of tardiness.; J0 L2 z; c5 X7 _' M
  Revision:One worker's plan eliminates tardiness.
" r- ^! {- V( s  四:不要使用语言过长且累赘的词语' e' i9 u" ?8 S) O
  写作不是用的词汇越高深就越高分,想提高成绩就要用词简单、生动。
  _# ]" ]' W7 Z  例如:& H3 u2 f: u+ t9 Q8 E, b/ n
  1、Wordy:We are in receipt of your letter and intend to follow your recommendations.
/ g7 B) {7 C9 R  Improved:We have received your letter and intended to follow your recommendation.' z  J2 O$ o3 c6 _: G
  2、Wordy:My little sister has a preference for chocolate milk.
: h5 i4 ^0 U, G1 K  Improved:My little sister prefers chocolate milk./ ^6 _) f) {% ?4 {0 G0 \1 L
  3、Redundant:We had a serious crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire.
4 i/ z+ I$ w0 C3 G, M  Improved:We had a crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire.
$ C& H8 V. t; C7 [: a8 Q: C  4、Redundant:My sister and I bought the same, identical dress in different stores.* G9 R% Y! \9 g3 s! @/ ~, T
  Improved:My sister and I bought the same dress in different stores8 ?# [' O1 ^' \) X' k
  雅思IELTS写作用词需要注意的几大要点实例分析
    五:避免陈旧词语或难懂的专业术语
) g1 b% W! @* B$ a% U  雅思是一门语言考试,主要考察烤鸭们的语言运用能力,而写作关键点就在文章的表现力上!
: k5 t! F. W7 m, k  g5 Q  ?  例如:
3 n' U. m; u! k9 y  q  1、Weak:I need her financial input before I can guesstimate our expenditures next fall.) X9 G' Y0 F) n$ \4 `8 d7 r4 I+ S6 h
  I need her financial figures before I can estimate our expenditures next fall.1 x! k4 O3 l" Q2 ^
  2、Weak:They will not agree to his proposals in any shape or form.
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Improved:They will not agree to any of his proposals.
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