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开放式天马小队 第六次作业截至24日24点 继续欢迎新人加入[回帖加入请占两层]

开放式天马小队 第六次作业截至24日24点 继续欢迎新人加入[回帖加入请占两层]

楼下是附件,大家可以下载,作业按照这个顺序布置.请大家每次注意以下作业布置的专用贴.




作业结构:2A+2I高频继续循环,并加入次高频,如果觉得2A太辛苦,各位可斟酌二选一,另一以checklist形式提交互改。
并提醒各位G友坚持列完所有的A提纲,以及大部分的I提纲

规则:

与之前相同,即按发帖先后顺序,甲乙互改,丙丁互改,依此类推。每人占两楼,作业贴发布后,紧接着再占一楼以备改文,以确保队形不乱。从布置作业起3日内为限,大家量力而行,无法一次交全的可以陆续编辑原帖。

但鉴于这是公开互改平台,请大家发作业贴时至少先贴一篇作业出来,以便于先交作业的同学先开始改。同时可以发站内消息提醒你的partner给你改文章,或敦促他/她完成作业。


请各位改作业时数清楼号,标明改几楼的,避免混乱和遗漏!
禁止用空的作业贴占位(其实这样没意义的),以免队伍顺序混乱,互改时找不到明确的partner。否则取消空帖子的排队。


请诸位交作业时将issue提纲 & argument checklist一并贴出, 使他人更直观地看出你的思路。毕竟两人之间的互改收获有限,列写思路提纲有利于所有组员都能博采众家之长。 而且share有助于攒RP,嗯。


6G时候的样板帖子:[url=thread-1024659-1-1.html]http://bbs.taisha.org/thread-1015662-1-20.html[/url]
第一次作业:A2+A17+I4+I7:[url=thread-1083717-1-1.html]http://bbs.taisha.org/thread-1083717-1-1.html[/url]
第二次作业:A38+A45+I11+I17:[url=thread-1085154-1-3.html]http://edu.taisha.org/bbs/thread-1085154-1-3.html[/url]
第三次作业:A47+A51+I36+I38:[url=thread-1088109-1-1.html]http://edu.taisha.org/bbs/thread-1088109-1-1.html[/url]

第四次作业:A53+A65+I41+I47:http://bbs.taisha.org/thread-1089480-1-2.html
第五次作业:A67+A71+I48+I50:http://edu.taisha.org/bbs/thread-1092499-1-2.html

第六次作业:A117+A131+I51+I83
ISSUE83 - "Government should preserve publicly owned wilderness areas in their natural state, even though these areas are often extremely remote and thus accessible to only a few people."

ISSUE51 - "Education will be truly effective only when it is specifically designed to meet the individual needs and interests of each student."


ARGUMENT131 - The following appeared in an environmental newsletter published in Tria Island.

"The marine sanctuary on Tria Island was established to protect certain marine mammals. Its regulations ban dumping and offshore oil drilling within 20 miles of Tria, but fishing is not banned. Currently many fish populations in Tria's waters are declining, a situation blamed on pollution. In contrast, the marine sanctuary on Omni Island has regulations that ban dumping, offshore oil drilling, and fishing within 10 miles of Omni and Omni reports no significant decline in its fish populations. Clearly, the decline in fish populations in Tria's waters is the result of overfishing, not pollution. Therefore, the best way to restore Tria's fish populations and to protect all of Tria's marine wildlife is to abandon our regulations and adopt those of Omni."

ARGUMENT117 - The following is a memo from the business manager of Valu-Mart stores.
"Over 70 percent of the respondents to a recent survey reported that they are required to take more work home with them from the workplace than they were in the past. Since Valu-Mart has not seen impressive sales in its office-supply departments in the past, we should take advantage of this work-at-home trend by increasing at all Valu-Mart stores the stock of home office machines such as printers, small copy machines, paper shredders, and fax machines. We will also increase stock of office supplies such as paper, pens, and staplers. With these changes, our office-supply departments will become the most profitable component of our stores."

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0810GAW天马小队再次开楼
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需要改作文的组员站内头条联系我吧。攒rp中。

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楼主,上次改的看了,十分感谢
另寻问下作业7呢
6是实在赶不上了。。。。。。

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