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我的关于英文写作的经验(对TWE肯定有帮助)

我的关于英文写作的经验(对TWE肯定有帮助)

考完托福,也有时间写点东西.想就英语写作方面谈点个人的心得体会.
首先看一下正式的英语写作的特点.

The characteristics of formal writing
1.名词化趋势
I do not eat much.-->I am a light eater.
The clock on the desk reminds me of time.-->I put a clock on the desk as a reminder of time.
We once cried, laughed and disappointed.-->There were moments of tears, moments of laughter, and moments of disappointment.
注意:名词化趋势的句子当然还有动词, 目的是尽量把表达句子中心意思的那个词汇用名词表达.符合英文的习惯.

2.无灵主语(区别于被动语态)
我们中文写作中,习惯以人做主语,而英文则相反,习惯以物做主格.
     More and more young students studied further in the past two decades.
-->The past two decades witnessed a growing number of young students for further study.
      Looking out of the window, you will have a nice view.
-->A glance out of the window offers you a nice view.
注意: 名词化趋势和无灵主语常常是相结合的.

3.被动语态
这一点大家比较熟悉,不详细讲.比如:
Great efforts should be made to…..
What can not be denied is that….


句式的写作:
Main features of English sentences:
1.长短句结合

Love is patient and kind. It is never jealous, boastful, proud or rude. It keeps no record of wrong that others do. It always protects, always fruits, always hopes, and always perseveres. Love never fails.
一般来讲,总结性的句子应当使用短句,而说理的句子应用长句.

2.并列复合句
这种句子属于十分难写的句子,也举一个例子:
He who wants to save his life will lose it, and he who loses his life for me will save it.

3.单一复合句
也就是我们常说的各种从句,不再举例.


Variety of sentences:
1. ”-ing & -ed” groups

e.g.
(1)Standing by the riverside, the Master sighed,” May time go on and on like this, never ceasing day and night.”
(2)Reviewing what one has learned and gaining new insights, one is fit to be a teacher.
(3)Compared with the tradition, modernity is more dynamic.

2. ”to do” groups
e.g.
To spend too much time in study is sloth; to use them too much for ornaments is affectation; to make any judgment wholly by their rules is the humor of the scholar.

3. adverb
Simply, amazingly, absurdly, broadly, practically and so on
e.g.
Intelligently applied to daily life, modern technology will surely bring benefits to the well-being of the human race.

4.介词短语
In pursuit of, in spite of     (注意平时自己的收集)
e.g.
In pursuit of excellence, ever pushing up the limit, life consists in the hope born of despair.

5.主语从句
e.g.
What China needs is not more morals, but more prisons for politicians.
句子的变化还有 It is self-evident(adj) that…….和There be 这样的句子

6.倒装
(1)将一些否定性含义的副词和短语在句首,用倒装会使句子生色不少.
Never before has such a high standard been achieved.
Hardly had he arrived when she started complaining.

(2)为使描绘更加生动,与介词同形的副词可以移动到句首,而把主语放到谓语后面去.
Following the roar, out rushed a tiger from the bushes.
In came a pretty girl he had never seen before.


插入语:
插入语可以是一个小词,也可以是一个同谓语的形式.
1.先看一个小技巧:(对there be 句型均有效)
There is, recently, a debate amongst educators that……
通俗的讲,在老外眼里,主语与谓语离的越远,句子的档次越高.

2.插入语后面再接上一个定语从句;
Direct experience, a necessary means to recognize the world, which differs from knowledge acquired from books, is a major step to the cognitive world.

再看几个同谓语从句的例子:
1.Television, one of the most pervasive and persuasive technologies, marked by the rapid growth and drastic change, has a profound impact on people’s lives.

2.Courage, a basic quality that every human being is supposed to possess when facing a dilemma, is highly cherished among young people.

3. Convention, generally accepted practice especially with regard to social behavior, has now been increasingly challenged.
平时要多积累这样的句型,使之变成自己的语言.
Tip:对同谓语的解释尽量宽泛一些,有利于句子的拉长.

对于在写TWE不知道如何漂亮开头的T友, 我强烈推荐用插入语加定语从句开头.
就是说:将题目中的中心词拿出来,进行宽泛的解释.
这一方法对很大一部分的考题都是有效的.
以上就是我的一点总结,希望对大家会有所帮助.


[ Last edited by lincoln_8513 on 2005-8-31 at 12:53 ]
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不错 建议精华
  

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太感谢了
真在为写不出来烦心...

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好像挺实用哦,多谢啦
在年轻的时候,如果你爱上了一个人,
请你,请你一定要温柔地对待他。
不管你们相爱的时间有多长或多短,
若你们能始终温柔地相待,
那么,所有的时刻都将是一种无瑕的美丽。
若不得不分离,也要好好地说声再见,
也要在心里存着感谢,感谢他给了你一份记忆。
长大了以后,你才会知道,
在蓦然回首的刹那,没有怨恨的青春才会了无遗憾,
如山冈上那轮静静的满月。

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回复 #1 lincoln_8513 的帖子

不错哦~~支持~~
胜利在向我微笑呢!

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要练习到熟练,的确不容易的
在年轻的时候,如果你爱上了一个人,
请你,请你一定要温柔地对待他。
不管你们相爱的时间有多长或多短,
若你们能始终温柔地相待,
那么,所有的时刻都将是一种无瑕的美丽。
若不得不分离,也要好好地说声再见,
也要在心里存着感谢,感谢他给了你一份记忆。
长大了以后,你才会知道,
在蓦然回首的刹那,没有怨恨的青春才会了无遗憾,
如山冈上那轮静静的满月。

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我就是缺乏练习啊~
胜利在向我微笑呢!

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好,经验之谈啊!
Final: Harvard + Columbia + AA in London

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谢谢大家的支持和鼓励
偶运用的也不算很熟练,以后还要再接再厉

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good,一看就是地道的英语,但是偶就是想不到。

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好东西呀,收藏

可我为什么一下笔什么都忘了。哎

放一颗心在你的身边
每次离去陪你入眠
你千万记住有我在耳边     说爱你

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很好的东西
顶一下

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写twe技巧的很少~加精华~
共你一分钟  都足够我生醉梦死

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谢谢分享~~~~

ღ.♥ ┊Aл ɡ è l     ǒ ζ     Gμ α γ d ī ǎ η┊ ♥.ღ



"Fǒ я s á κ è п"
`sì η κ _ α ń ɡ ё l

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Thanks alot啊!!!!!!!!!!好东西,特别是插入语,特好。我怎么没有在考G的时候看到这样的文章呢,现在T也考完了。。。。只能用到以后写paper了。。。。

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谢谢,已经收藏下来了

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thanks a lot

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很有帮助,但不敢完全同意.
尤其是名词化趋势

被动语态也绝对不是英语中常见的语态,绝对不可能取代主动的表达.

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"作者主张多用动词,少用名词,多用意义具体的词,少用抽象含混的词."
见<中式英语之鉴> Joan Pinkham
姚小平的序.

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回复 #18 garyS 的帖子

偶说的都是正式的议论文(issue)
你说的应该是其他类型的文章

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