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呆瓜组招募组员,一同拿下作文,冲上4.5

本主题由 moxl1979 于 2005-12-17 10:26 设置高亮

呆瓜组招募组员,一同拿下作文,冲上4.5

大家好, 为了互相督促,抓紧时间,提高效率,备战考试,现呆瓜组招组员4-8人要求如下:: L) M) H) c' C$ B1 V  N( Z
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- y4 p  O7 o9 S5 H- x) N$ |# @呆瓜组目前有一位组员因为最近较忙,暂时退出,希望愿意和我们携手共进的踊跃参加呀!
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       参照作 文机经(20050916作文机经),我们的作业题目从机井中选择高频题,由组长布置,也可自选(每周争取过一类,由第一类开始),每周写3篇issue和argument。星期1、3、5分别写作issue和argument各一篇,2、4、6晚9:00前必须脚作业,贴在作文考试专版。
# `* F/ l6 v3 h: u组员要求:每周2.4.6 等同伴贴出作业后,必须在当天,或下一,二天把作业改完。并且自己按时交作业。
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, l' h1 X  K* Q( a9 {     1,题目例:issue11 呆瓜组某某的作业(后面的随便写), U( d7 C$ Z7 ^  ~; ?4 Y
            
4 t7 g8 {$ r3 _     2,正文:先把题目抄一遍,然后在后面加上提纲,再写ISSUE/ARGUMENT,一方面加深自己印象,另外一方面节省大家宝贵的时间。谢谢合作!

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6 Z' d1 N! K8 T  在规定时间内完成作业或者修改,通报批评;
0 |) V4 [' L, w) d& ^* q/ A  三次连续不写作业或者3次连续不修改其他组员的作文,请自动退出小组。

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0 t. t2 A) s, ?- ^% Q1, 每一期由组长出题,题目在周日晚9:00前给出,组员在完成作业以后把链接贴进来,跟在每次作业帖后面。组长实行轮流制,每一期还有副组长,两人商量出题,并督促组员完成作业,不给偷懒的机会。
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; S# j! h% J7 X# N& j/ {' T0 g2,组员之间相互修改,人员名单确定后,分组互改,每期轮流分组互改,再由每一期的嘉宾对组员的作文进行简略点评,总结较好的观点和例子。
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0 F+ [3 ~  |! k$ I1 J" I目前的组员为:Rhollin,人类回声,happyleer,dganggang, leedgen,拉风
& x4 e# q% ?  F0 \( ?: k' w( v欢迎新加入的组员adventurer1978 ,happy_shirly, skyliu7 {" |- I6 w2 W9 Y

7 m9 P& w1 x5 d) k0 G$ u本期作业修改顺序为:6 P5 a: Y, _2 b. O* q
明天晚上应交作业为issue26,argument133注意呀!!!一定要交!!!
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4 ?( M8 I: x7 w6 ~% Ehappyleer----dganggang./ Y* w; k' ]3 }- @; [6 i/ \/ U: r
leedgen-------拉风
* W& L% J& |( q& r本周组长为happyleer,副组长为leedgen
( w/ [9 @. v5 y. r期待大家的参与!想加入的快来报名吧!留下qq及e-mail,方便联系!
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# S. d8 ^. r1 z! J" M' \; G附上作业:(争分夺秒,想和大家一起前进的就赶快写吧!)1 F* V7 [- d% T/ W  c: A
issue:百年大计与社会进步类; B2 u( k, _7 C! A8 s; f
11、"All nations should help support the development of a global university designed to engage students in the process of solving the world's most persistent social problems."
8 _0 r9 n% w5 H% r" F) l1 O26、"Most people would agree that buildings represent a valuable record of any society's past, but controversy arises when old buildings stand on ground that modern planners feel could be better used for modern purposes. In such situations, modern development should be given precedence over the preservation of historic buildings so that contemporary needs can be served."
% `6 [' D. N9 v% c170、"The surest indicator of a great nation is not the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists, but the general welfare of all its people."
: P9 [) d( t2 ]173、"Originality does not mean thinking something that was never thought before; it means putting old ideas together in new ways." 5 G0 b1 R! s$ `! ^, x7 _3 N; g5 y
argument:
) ?5 B1 x, x# j5 R& r* ~6。The following was written as a part of an application for a small business loan by a group of developers in the city of Monroe. 6 N; u# i% M' d

# }" N9 {0 x, q9 g$ ^"A jazz music club in Monroe would be a tremendously profitable enterprise. Currently, the nearest jazz club is 65 miles away; thus, our proposed club, the C Note, would have the local market all to itself. Plus, jazz is extremely popular in Monroe: over 100,000 people attended Monroe's jazz festival last summer, several well-known jazz musicians live in Monroe, and the highest-rated radio program in Monroe is 'Jazz Nightly,' which airs every weeknight. Finally, a nationwide study indicates that the typical jazz fan spends close to $1,000 per year on jazz entertainment. It is clear that the C Note cannot help but make money." ' w8 s0 q0 w# j' {8 Q1 e% V. ?9 T

8 B4 C" h- ]- R! U* l6 m133。The following is a memo from the principal of Academia High School.
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"Academia High School should abolish its after-school performing-arts programs and replace them with computer-technology programs. When nearby Techno High School did so last year, total enrollment in all of its after-school activities remained about the same. Moreover, on entering college, many Techno students chose a major directly related to their after-school activities. On the other hand, last year only 10 percent of Academia's graduating seniors chose performing arts as their major field of study in their first year of college, clearly indicating that most students do not have a strong interest in the performing arts."
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"Several recent surveys indicate that homeowners are increasingly eager to conserve energy and manufacturers are now marketing many home appliances, such as refrigerators and air conditioners, that are almost twice as energy-efficient as those sold a decade ago. Also, new technologies for better home insulation and passive solar heating are readily available to reduce the energy needed for home heating. Therefore, we anticipate that the total demand for electricity in our area will not increase, and may decline slightly. Since our three electric generating plants in operation for the past 20 years have always met our needs, construction of new generating plants should not be necessary."
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5 k* l" X) L) N: @[ 本帖最后由 happyleer 于 2005-12-21 16:21 编辑 ]

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我报名% T/ A: T8 s0 v' I7 X4 F
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dganggang@hotmail.com
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呵呵~~今天下午终于把期末项目赶完了
! z& y1 d: B- B: l, G有作业啊...... 今天晚上睡觉,明天再写~~
拂晓的时刻 在半梦半醒之间 风从我的脸颊吹过
你的声音 你的气味 全部充满在四围
放飞思念 展开翅膀 在与你同一片的天空下飞翔
虽然星空渐渐融在晨光中 我依然能看见你那灿烂的光芒
就是如此喜欢你 愿两人终会相遇在未知的彼方

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大家加油呀

每次作业可直接发在作文版,发完在每次作业帖后链接,方便修改与总结,issue每周4题,鼓励大家多写。& q1 {3 _2 \* B+ A( n& a
互相监督,消除惰性,拿下作文!

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呆瓜组拉风作业链接贴

我的作业:[/color]$ E$ i$ u  |) }8 M5 B  j8 O
issue 26:  http://bbs.taisha.org/viewthread ... &extra=page%3D12 r9 I' a8 s6 Z, @; ?
argument133:  http://bbs.taisha.org/viewthread ... &extra=page%3D1
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issue 59:  http://bbs.taisha.org/viewthread ... &extra=page%3D1- f2 l' L# o" L1 D; W" a
argument 10  http://bbs.taisha.org/viewthread ... &extra=page%3D1
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[ 本帖最后由 拉风 于 2005-12-22 11:36 编辑 ]

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怎么忘了我呀?我也参加的也
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argument就从高频题目练起吧
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! P0 U/ Q" ]" `[ 本帖最后由 leedgen 于 2005-12-15 08:52 编辑 ]

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呵呵!真高兴

对不起,leedgen,大家都回来最好呀!
! K- a9 d: e6 }& `9 G  Qagument就是从统计出的2,3月高频题中出的。小组成员由什么意见都可以提出,为我们小组成功完成作业努力。
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issue26 http://bbs.taisha.org/viewthread ... &extra=page%3D1  o3 q( O$ D* V
agument133 http://bbs.taisha.org/viewthread ... &extra=page%3D17 n7 d6 G4 m0 z4 e1 r/ n/ ]
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[ 本帖最后由 happyleer 于 2005-12-15 21:36 编辑 ]

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报名 qq:6565180 mail:usstlzp@citiz.net.3月14作文

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讨论一下

大家认为每周写几篇文章比较好?发表一下意见
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; E+ S, S; L- ~+ D[ 本帖最后由 happyleer 于 2005-12-15 23:03 编辑 ]

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顶一下

这期大家都没有做链接呀!

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http://bbs.taisha.org/viewthread ... &extra=page%3D1
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2 U! h; V0 @* _. T8 l% C( [% S0 a每周就3篇issue足够了 2,4,6交,最好是一周过完一类话题,现在先抓issue3 s+ ~! T- F% s% {" k% ?
如果时间充裕的化可以自己练练argument3 d7 q  m2 T7 x- P! {

9 O" J# v% T; d7 ]3 Q- @: a6 `我觉得先一对一的详细改~~然后每个人都把小组内各成员的作文大致的看一下,提点自己的意见
% Y# h; r  W) u0 _, f2 `2 G1 A最后找个时间(推荐星期天)来做交流,组员最好到齐,都来说说对本周作文的自己的看法,比如自己写作存在的问题,别人的问题,怎么解决之类的.......
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; U% \5 V( U5 P, G- A[ 本帖最后由 Rhollin 于 2005-12-16 21:30 编辑 ]
拂晓的时刻 在半梦半醒之间 风从我的脸颊吹过
你的声音 你的气味 全部充满在四围
放飞思念 展开翅膀 在与你同一片的天空下飞翔
虽然星空渐渐融在晨光中 我依然能看见你那灿烂的光芒
就是如此喜欢你 愿两人终会相遇在未知的彼方

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楼上的意见不错

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大家都来顶顶这个贴,千万别让它沉哪,对了大家在这里开作业链接贴吧?到时候方面拍砖。

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现在还要招队员吗?
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我也想参加

考试日期:2月28日
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我报名

考试日期2月9号
. _5 L2 R: T% i0 B考试地点 广州
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欢迎大家

大家想参加就先交作业吧,然后我们在分组

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对不起,又要晚交作业了,请happyleer, leedgen 及其它呆瓜组员谅解!

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还是不太明白怎么参加?

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