Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Parents are the best teachers .Use specific reasons and  examples to support your answer.
. ~/ M: b& Q2 A& F/ y& K) }2 T9 |5 D) eAs a proverb says”parents are the first teachers to their children”.And what I want to say here is that cultured parents are the best teachers.
% C: ~/ P' E$ B8 }As we all know,childhood is an important period when children learn how to live in the society and communicate with others.In which what the parents do undoubtedly affected children’s life.Even though the gesture and tune of speaking or even face expression,if you take a note of parents and children,it will be apparently some same.
" T) v) G% g! [2 q& M4 v" oWhen children grow up,they will have their own thinking and idea but because of their lacking in social experiences,they still more need the instruction from their parents which may be the milestone of their change in life.We have seen a lot of knowledged parents guide their children adroitly according to circumstances and when grown up who have gained a perfect success. I impose on “cultured” parents here because there are still a lot of parents with bad behavior has adversely affected their children even lead them to the road of crime.
8 I8 T2 H; L' L  [: nAbove in one word,parents undoubtedly are the first teachers but if want to be the best firstly they should trained themselves cultured.

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers .Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
7 X' m( x+ J5 V. Z: M2 L+ w5 X/ CAs a proverb says “parents are the first teachers to their children”. And what I want to say here is that cultured (literate) parents are the best teachers.0 y& S) ]) }* D2 Q7 B' t% P9 V, Q
As we all know, childhood is an important period when children learn how to live in the society and communicate with others. In which what the parents do undoubtedly affected children’s life (pl.). Even though (去掉， take ~~~as example) the gesture and tune of speaking or even face expression, if you take a note of (record the gesture, tune of speaking of the) parents and  children, it(they) will be apparently some same.
( e  H" \, ^6 nWhen children grow up, they will have their own thinking and idea but because of their lacking in social experiences,(However, lacking in social experiences )they still more(去掉more) need the instruction from their parents which may be the milestone of their change(milestone 包含了转折的意思) in life. We have seen a lot of knowledged parents（knowledged 用错了 parents who had high academic achievement） guide their children adroitly according to circumstances and when (their children) grown up who(they) have gained a perfect success. I impose on “cultured” parents here because there are still a lot of parents with bad behavior has adversely affected their children even lead them to the road of crime.
' C) L, X5 v! f' oAbove in one word (this is a sentence), parents undoubtedly are the first teachers but if want to be the best firstly they should trained themselves cultured.
4 [4 C- x, Y  d7 |字数不够，中间加一段论述其他教育和父母教育的比较。

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