真题作文实例 作文28分
本人RLSW分别29262628 109。为了说明托福作文的简易写法，特写此文& Z/ Z8 m$ ^4 A) A
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对于大牛不合适，对于初学本人认为特合适！0 y' R4 e6 p% e: q/ a }# j2 c
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我写作文当然用模板！我原来考了GRE，作文4.5，感觉还行吧。所以托福作文没怎么看，直接把gre的方法拿来用。当时写的字数很少，只有350字。# C. w' c C5 w& c4 G
文章模板非常简单，就是
9 `; z. U/ v9 i/ f开头+三点原因+结尾（就是开头），不论是G还是T，百试不爽。4 p8 q! ~, |; k
( r+ j, z, N% t7 N5 a6 I就拿考试作文来说吧，我说说写的方法，尽量回忆接近原作：* M, f9 A4 L5 J& [5 B2 }5 X
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题目：该不该关心国际时事？6 G0 }3 O: l5 Q* n
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我心中的第一想法：去他妈的，跟我有嘛关系？（真的是第一想法，有些粗俗，一闪而过）第二找原因，一般凑出来三条：a.国际时事要大量背景知识，咱没这些知识; F, k0 J5 a& ]0 u# I* V- g: O2 V
b.看这些事实需大量时间，咱没时间: a7 R- q" @ B9 a* c! T ~! z
c. 咱听到国际时事基本都不是嘛好事，让咱不爽) Z) Q, s3 Y S$ q) @4 g
z. e. D7 H: t3 d接下来就要写了，我一步一步写：
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Whether we should pay attention to global events, different people will have different ideas due to their background. As for me I strongly disagree with the idea and the reasons are as follows.' w& G' k& l- I
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Firstly, to analyse global events needs lot’s of background knowledge that is too much for us. In short it is not possible for us to understand the events.
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; M) W" }( ]: g9 U. J( m, rSecondly, it is so great a task to read news papers and webpages to get the global events that cost too much time. In conclusion to pay attention to global events is too time consuming a task for us.
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Last but not least, most global events that come to us are unhappy things. So we should not make us unpleasent by learning the global events.7 M" `' {/ D. I/ Q$ D
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In conclusion, we should not pay attention to global events. It needs too much knowledge that we don’t have, and it is time costing. Also global events always make us unhappy.5 x* b. |" m6 f2 Z" V6 z
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开头：问题点明+废话+自己想法
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2 f& K$ o! \8 g7 s, C7 oFirstly，原因一开头中心句。原因一结尾总结句。
, m* b6 ]9 s4 j6 z7 E$ i5 FSecondly，原因二开头中心句。原因二结尾总结句。4 R5 P& J t# _2 J- ]7 B' c
Last but not least，原因三开头中心句。原因三结尾总结句。2 X% p; B- `- }$ G f0 d% b
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在屏幕上打出这些字应该用掉三分之一的时间了，剩下时间给每段写例子。
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Whether we should pay attention to global events, different people will have different ideas due to their background. As for me I strongly disagree with the idea and the reasons are as follows." Y( X3 [7 _# y; g5 B* M1 N
3 v! D2 I+ C( O8 w! a5 Z& h6 AFirstly, to analyse global events needs lot’s of background knowledge that is too much for us. Take the middle east war as an example. Those countries fight each other because comples reasons, and$ z5 ^- u- u- M; i X
event these reasons are related to too much background knowledge we don’t know. So it is impossible for us to understand the war, and to know these events is not meaningful. 这再来了例子，仿照上面，谢谢某国选举，咱看了也一头雾水。 In short it is not possible for us to understand the events.* y7 _, \% K* i
/ E3 e j$ r4 P9 L% v% sSecondly, it is so great a task to read news papers and webpages to get the global events that cost too much time.
( l# _$ C4 i2 j. S* h. bMost of us are busy every day, and time is precious. However there are countless news every day, so how is it possible for us to choose and read the global events? A good example is the news webpages. You will feel crazy when you see the pages full of news. To read the new swill waste our time because we have something more important to do. In conclusion to pay attention to global events is too time consuming a task for us.
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* R" t& a4 \; c$ }$ FLast but not least, most global events that come to us are unhappy things. It seems that people are more interested in news of dark side, so nowadays medias are filled with bad news. For instance whenever I turn on the TV, most news are unhappy ones, such as terrorism, earthquake, murder, disaster and so on. They all make me feel sad, and influeced my studying effeciency or even make me amnesea.So we should not make us unpleasent by learning the global events.
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t, [' P, `+ n0 Z& ^& WIn conclusion, we should not pay attention to global events. It needs too much knowledge that we don’t have, and it is time costing. Also global events always make us unhappy.- A3 [; y: q# l1 ^: v( E9 B: h
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这就是我的作文，350字，红色部分是补充的。写这些，连想带输入大概17分钟，剩下时间检查一下。( O) v& b |& Q8 n) V) a' c
& {+ d" i- C+ E+ w A& q: {0 x本人感觉这样写是比较有效率且安全的，首先，写例子时折断的前后两句始终提醒你不会跑题；第二，三段写下来长短大致相同，不会出现不平衡；第三，就算出现时间不够，也不会说是没有文章结尾而导致严重结构问题。
