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[其他] 关于CV写作的5个 top tips

曼曼啦啦啦   发表于 2015-7-23 14:04:11 | 显示全部楼层 | 阅读模式 | 跳转到指定楼层
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2016年秋季申请转眼就要开始啦,相信很多小伙伴已经在准备申请文书了  (*゚▽゚*)
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最近在Future Learn上面学了一门关于申请文书写作的课程~虽然主要是针对求职申请的,不过里面还是有不少很赞的可以用于留学申请文书上的好东东 \(•ㅂ•)/♥ 在这里跟大家一起分享一下,顺便大家有关于CV写作的问题也可以在这里一起讨论哦(╭ ̄3 ̄)╭) W0 d- N+ D" U+ V/ y; k

$ @; E: Q6 j1 y: n5 F( n+ i, ^$ `- b- r另外,楼主的英语是外星语水平,所以如果下面有说的不对的地方...求不要打脸嘤嘤嘤 ( ̄ε(# ̄)
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Tip No.1 - Don’t list
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; s! N, Z9 v5 Z$ z7 B) XWhen writing about your experiences don’t just list your activities or duties. This will mean very little to the recruiter as they won’t know what those duties actually involved or what you got out of them. Where possible, go on to describe the results you achieved and the skills or qualities you demonstrated.
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1 f9 _4 w" x8 {/ o& ^- j* _. w*这一点是说不要简单地罗列一堆你的职责或者做过的事情,更正确的做法应该是描述你取得的结果以及你在一项工作中运用了哪些技能或者能力。
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* d4 N2 y8 d( R; Q- H& G2 ~Tip No.2 - Use ‘power words’ - here are a few examples8 n" v1 S1 ?/ f* _! a4 J

$ d8 V$ m! k6 rAccomplished
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Adapted
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* J, V/ H: `' A3 Z; y+ b& {: tAnalysed
  d2 \" i# f% V) GCo-ordinated
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Completed / C) T" Q! m8 @1 I8 ]! x
Created
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Developed
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Helped        Implemented0 L! V; i, g. K) y9 |, g
Improved
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Maintained
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Negotiated
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Persuaded) j. ^3 |7 v* T5 N! X2 W, b# k
Planned
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Resolved1 C/ P* m7 }. t, k1 h- v# M
Team Working
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*运用“关键词”,上面是举的一些栗子 (☆▽☆)y; @4 n8 v+ L, g& N3 \* L, v
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Tip No. 3 - Use verbs at the start of the sentence/ Q, M) L/ X. E" C/ t6 i( h7 Y
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Starting a sentence with a verb or power word (eg, Completed…, Negotiated…, Delivered…) not only provides a strong and clear opener but it can also make your skills and achievements stand out, especially if the recruiter is speed-reading your application. It also stimulates the reader to want to learn more about you.
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5 i5 d$ ^0 t" k- u0 \/ T  Q* P, q*句子的开头使用动词(动宾结构)或上面提到的“关键词”,这样能够让人很清晰地看到他们想要知道的东西
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Tip No. 4 - Write in an active style( a+ _( Y; J! l

1 Y# e+ H( w5 p% _An active style puts the emphasis on the action you took, rather than what you were expected to do - the latter sets a rather passive tone which won’t impress a recruiter. Here’s an example:* [% }; E4 q8 D6 d- i

" F3 ^: t3 V+ v) r' ZPassive style: ‘The project required me to research information from various sources. I had to make conclusions and present my findings in a report. It involved working under pressure and coping with deadlines.’8 W* u5 x+ t. {' ~" |$ Z* F) S
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Active style: ‘Researched information using various sources including databases and scientific journals. Produced a comprehensive report that detailed my findings which received 76% (equivalent to a ‘distinction’ level grade). Learnt the value of prioritising tasks for effective time management.’
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In the passive style, the sentences are accurate, but weak and vague. Using the active style, the writer implies that they took the initiative.
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5 R2 Y. Y% z) B+ [/ R) t*这里是说CV里面的表述要给人一种积极向上的赶脚!上面举了active & passive style的栗子,简单来说就是“在这个项目中我做了大量的文献收集,写了一个完整的报告里面用到了76%的数据”和“这个项目要我做很多数据收集,我只好做了一个总结”...哪种style比较好简直一目了然有!木!有!; y+ T4 [% {( j: n* s( T
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Tip No. 5 - Write concisely (short sentences, line spaces & bullet points)
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This paragraph shows how text in a CV or application form can often be difficult to read when grouped together in one huge ‘block’. Selectors could have difficulty in extracting the key information and this is not what you want to happen. Not only can it be difficult to extract p**inent information, huge blocks of text don’t always look good on the page, and can create a poor first impression. This negative attitude may influence how employers react to the content of applications. It can also lead to a negative judgement on how well you communicate. If you claim to have good communication skills and then present long paragraphs of text that are off-putting to read, then you are failing to communicate effectively through your application.
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0 R- N0 x$ E9 y: M, FCompare a large block of text with a bullet point approach, where text is also broken up by sub headings and line spacing:. ~0 b, c( Q* J* `# e& A

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Look how easy it is to get a similar number of words across by splitting the text into two sections and using bullet points and bold text.% h! k/ L! d& A! G1 L; @$ c
These are easier to read, look neater on the page, and grab a recruiter’s attention to create a positive first impression.
5 x# R! p$ q2 O, X! xRecruiters can see your key points clearly without real effort.
, ~4 F4 k! X* c& R( ZEffective wording
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You need to give examples and evidence to prove your point.% f. S8 }; C3 b* b; L, w5 G
This style makes it easier to read and communicate key selling points relevant to the job or course.
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: k0 |# ^8 _  i7 O, z' w0 Q*这里是说简历尽可能简洁明了,几个有效的方法包括:
' u: K8 ?$ K! x4 }' ]: U' {1. 尽可能使用短句(见过好多逼死人的不写从句会死星人)
" H0 T. B& Z$ K5 F8 X2. 调整行距、字体、页边距等(看起来更干净和舒服,不要挑战阅读者的眼力)
, v/ M( E* _9 ]3. 学会使用项目符号(注意分点,有时候加粗、斜体等也是很好用的)
- w" O4 F8 ?5 L1 D4. 明确自己的point,并给出相应的事例  l  j1 Q* [! W6 z( D
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以上就是5个关于CV写作的tips啦~下面还有一些sample~大家有需要可以看一下~ (/≥▽≤/)  
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7 T* z1 N' J4 H! UCV-Sample(228.76K)CV-Sample(324.71K)
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露珠说好的sample呢→_→
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LZ大赞   谢谢分享~
发表于 2015-7-23 14:30:59 | 显示全部楼层

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重新上传啦~~♪(^∇^*)

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CKay223 发表于 2015-7-23 14:29: O( m2 w! b/ W) |, B6 s
好帖!!收藏了!
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已经上传了~酷爱来下载23333/ x8 @; x5 z) J- X
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Racheltam 发表于 2015-7-23 14:23: T. x4 R: a3 p
露珠说好的sample呢→_→
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已经上传了啦!
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楼主你好,我可以发我的简历给你帮我参考参考吗!
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感谢楼主的分享。但没东西写怎么办?
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曼曼啦啦啦 发表于 2015-7-23 14:44
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这个就是你之前推荐那个嘛,University of Sheffield开的那个?
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TeslaModelS 发表于 2015-7-23 15:331 T" M# r, |. D9 V
楼主你好,我可以发我的简历给你帮我参考参考吗!

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顶一下d=====( ̄▽ ̄*)b
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Racheltam 发表于 2015-7-24 10:27
  ~, x( v8 E7 K9 s这个就是你之前推荐那个嘛,University of Sheffield开的那个?

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  谢谢分享  么啊
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支持一下~
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谢谢分享~~
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赞好文
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曼曼啦啦啦 发表于 2015-7-24 11:14
3 Q$ ^' o% j; ?8 S, f/ M6 n) y我自己也在上课的说(*/ω\*)...你不介意的话可以发给我看看嘿嘿嘿
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谢谢!邮箱私信给我可以吗~
2 i: Q& u$ e+ D# S& E; @另外想问问,美国学校对简历的页数有要求吗?
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不错,支持一下。
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同LS的LS。请问下简历一般建议篇幅多长呢?
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偶尔上来逛逛总会发现好人帖 不错不错
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