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[IELTS作文] 作文2求拍砖,谢谢!

Jiangbond   发表于 2015-11-4 12:51:41 | 显示全部楼层 | 阅读模式 | 跳转到指定楼层
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PhysicalActivity Survey

Your companyblames a number of work-related accidents on employees' low level of physicalfitness. The Human Resources Department of your company is surveying youropinion on how to promote a healthier lifestyle amongst its employees. Themajor question is whether the company should build a large gym facility in thecompany’s premises, or pay for employees to sign up for physical activitieswherever they choose.

Dear Sir or Madame,

Thank you for surveying me about enhancinga healthy lifestyle. On company's portal, I have lately seen numerous accidentsat workplace that were attributed to employees' miserably undeveloped physicalfitness. I believe the company made a wise decision to promote gym to ouremployees.

There are quite a few opinions from ourmanagement team about building a large 24-hour access gym inside the company.Managers think, in that way, they are able to both motivate employees andincrease their working hours.

However, there are three side effects ofthe above onion. First, a gym takes too much unnecessary space inside the company.I do not think we have sufficient room for such a gym without acquiring thecompany nearby. Then, 24-hour access exposes the company into unsafe positionthat we need to enforce all day and night monitoring to ensure security.Moreover, if employees get insured in the gym, they may sue the company fordamages.

Reimbursing  the employees for external gym, on the other hand, is more flexible. In thatway, we do not need to worry about the limitedspace the gym is going to occupy, no need to enforce 24-hour security and leavealone employees' liability. Finally yet importantly, employees can choose howto spend the money. To those who need to buy nutrients to maintain health. Gymwill not be a top priority. Instead, they will be able to allocated moneywisely.

In conclusion, I firmly believe thatproviding financial supports to motivate employees to sign up for physicalactivities are the optimal solution to solve our current problem.

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