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[点滴技巧] 雅思IELTS写作用词需要注意的几大要点实例分析

jackd   发表于 2017-12-7 11:58:33 | 显示全部楼层 | 阅读模式 | 跳转到指定楼层
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4 ~- r8 Z. ?. K* n. ?# R   对于参加雅思考试的同学来说,雅思写作是其中比较难得一部分,那么雅思写作用词方面有什么讲究呢?5 @& x7 u( N2 g2 I7 r1 {% `7 b
   雅思IELTS写作用词需要注意的几大要点
& G5 j( O& Z2 \, l( n  一使用具体的动词
2 `) c4 q6 z6 K' z9 G1 M  比较具体的描写会让文章看起来更有说服力,分数当然能提高啦!
, d/ w: |- _! O! S  例如:) C% h3 v, i$ {9 T" }* |. X: {0 D# l  W
  1、Poor:My supervisor went past my desk.# {" J  _: y; J% f) W/ z
  Better:My supervisor sauntered (=walked slowly) past my desk.' }0 S- j  o0 V7 K- X+ B% a4 V) @
  2、Poor:She is a careful shopper.
. b2 o) [) D7 ]# J3 A2 y" D' Q  v  t  Better:She compares prices and quality.
. a- d( u) i. q: r% i% A- Q) v  二:表语转化为不同的修饰语+ J1 \5 t: W6 x: O1 Q
  很多烤鸭不明白什么时候用主动,什么被动!用错了,雅思写作分数自然不高!这样做,也是因为这个原因!, o7 S; ]% o3 p* L. c* v9 ]0 C
  例如:
( o) z) T  T. {  1、Weak:The organization has been supported by charity.
+ ?* K) x  @) c. C: a+ A# `# H  Better:Charity has supported the organization.
& x' H& ~- d2 ^6 c  2、Weak:The biscuits were stacked on a plate.
1 n6 x6 e1 l& v$ M! j  Better:Mother stacked the biscuits on a plate. 
, q6 ^8 Y+ H5 N! Z+ W- o6 V& o: v- z   三:避免使用语言弱的“be”动词
" p/ j, @) M* L$ N  1、在“here”或“there”开头的句子中,把“be”动词后的名词代词变成改写句的主语) I( j3 i& ]6 S( c. K
  例如:; l) O! N) B9 K( q
  1) Weak:Here are the books you ordered.
/ V- ^, C. O/ @5 w/ Y  Revision:The books you ordered have arrived.
/ {% n4 h1 S% x! ]  2) Weak:There is no opportunity for promotion.' B7 t3 o/ O. t* N% ~
  Revision:No opportunity for promotion exists.
' v3 _0 O2 ~3 [  t8 S% I$ o8 U- e  2、表语转换为不同的修饰语
9 O  L& H' s& w. n- W, R: `3 @% }7 A2 G  例如:
) c2 d5 E! [" x# o  Weak:The trees are bare. The grass is brown. The landscape seems drab.
8 w+ X7 ~. f. [% W. Z! ~  Revision:The brown grass and bare trees form a drab landscape. (转换为前置定语), }: t$ m2 }: u
  The landscape, bare and brown, begged for spring green. (转换为并列结构作后置定语)
/ d3 z' u& m2 E6 w& e$ {+ i% r$ h5 ^  3、作表语用的形容词或名词变为行为动词! C* K( H- Y3 ]/ l
  例如:
& p6 q' u% p, y. V& J0 T; Z  1) Weak:The team members are good players.
- _# }5 a6 J1 S: K/ s  Revision:The team members play well.' X6 J; X7 h3 v3 o+ ^0 c
  2) Weak:One worker's plan is the elimination of tardiness.* H, i- A& Z" `8 k: _
  Revision:One worker's plan eliminates tardiness.
' a* K, X" T' X" Y: |: b  四:不要使用语言过长且累赘的词语) \* P/ {/ k! ]
  写作不是用的词汇越高深就越高分,想提高成绩就要用词简单、生动。
& C- P8 e$ d( o( y5 A9 P) y. w  例如:' l' \6 n# z3 i' t4 R2 ^
  1、Wordy:We are in receipt of your letter and intend to follow your recommendations.
4 y3 g4 P/ b# H/ I+ C4 P1 |; E  Improved:We have received your letter and intended to follow your recommendation.0 U# d6 r# k' O4 R4 p) v4 V
  2、Wordy:My little sister has a preference for chocolate milk.
+ B# j5 M: N" ]9 x4 Q4 z  Improved:My little sister prefers chocolate milk.
, \2 K8 _+ x$ V4 [$ j  3、Redundant:We had a serious crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire./ U* ~& x6 Q& v
  Improved:We had a crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire./ K/ z; {! |3 w6 X* K* R
  4、Redundant:My sister and I bought the same, identical dress in different stores.5 ^% f& b! g2 L# A3 {* i- x5 O2 D
  Improved:My sister and I bought the same dress in different stores
8 b( ^2 F) \4 B$ U2 i; ]# ]  雅思IELTS写作用词需要注意的几大要点实例分析
    五:避免陈旧词语或难懂的专业术语' b- D' R  C: _: o
  雅思是一门语言考试,主要考察烤鸭们的语言运用能力,而写作关键点就在文章的表现力上!, B# f, b" R7 m9 H4 r" y0 {5 }
  例如:
: ~- \& q% W* \8 B  z  1、Weak:I need her financial input before I can guesstimate our expenditures next fall.8 I6 h( c% h5 [6 ]9 g, q4 s% U
  I need her financial figures before I can estimate our expenditures next fall.) Y% v4 \" z+ [: U9 `
  2、Weak:They will not agree to his proposals in any shape or form.: N5 N2 b6 ^$ ?2 E3 V  Q: E
 
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Improved:They will not agree to any of his proposals.
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