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[点滴技巧] 雅思IELTS写作用词需要注意的几大要点实例分析

jackd   发表于 2017-12-7 11:58:33 | 显示全部楼层 | 阅读模式 | 跳转到指定楼层
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   对于参加雅思考试的同学来说,雅思写作是其中比较难得一部分,那么雅思写作用词方面有什么讲究呢?* V' c6 [* K  r7 a
   雅思IELTS写作用词需要注意的几大要点
, H( l- P* \3 ]8 H. b4 F, |  一使用具体的动词8 S. A& z& u- ~: \5 S
  比较具体的描写会让文章看起来更有说服力,分数当然能提高啦!
2 I  N% L& K: A5 U% ~  例如:2 t' d: T8 `, {9 |
  1、Poor:My supervisor went past my desk.
0 m! D% W4 m$ U' j# i  Better:My supervisor sauntered (=walked slowly) past my desk.& O# ~+ Y- `0 t8 _; i
  2、Poor:She is a careful shopper.4 `/ Q" P4 `. ~$ j" L/ m
  Better:She compares prices and quality.$ f$ Q8 O# m5 ]+ F3 A
  二:表语转化为不同的修饰语  |* Z9 n- {  ]+ S( X( n% }1 ?
  很多烤鸭不明白什么时候用主动,什么被动!用错了,雅思写作分数自然不高!这样做,也是因为这个原因!
4 J3 T- g- Z; M/ A  [  例如:
9 J8 @, p6 J4 B5 A  1、Weak:The organization has been supported by charity.
% o: `) Y4 _( ^" @. o/ W  Better:Charity has supported the organization.! N7 ^# S1 h3 G1 H/ }- ]& N
  2、Weak:The biscuits were stacked on a plate.
0 j) f- X3 M, ~/ F0 S4 u  V- f  Better:Mother stacked the biscuits on a plate. 0 W" ?. y0 B! T  X
   三:避免使用语言弱的“be”动词; f$ ?& ^# b5 X
  1、在“here”或“there”开头的句子中,把“be”动词后的名词代词变成改写句的主语+ G/ P# Q% i6 {2 U
  例如:; V; R; m1 N# `5 Y4 u
  1) Weak:Here are the books you ordered.
4 Q  A" K! b% z9 ~# T* B  Revision:The books you ordered have arrived.
8 D! D& R, D, ?! e4 R) K: |$ t+ Y  2) Weak:There is no opportunity for promotion.% F$ H; U* c0 m8 P3 N# n
  Revision:No opportunity for promotion exists.. @* i2 M0 M+ J4 T% w3 G
  2、表语转换为不同的修饰语
4 T, ~* E0 I. ~, N5 o  例如:& P$ `, i6 \! k$ E* I
  Weak:The trees are bare. The grass is brown. The landscape seems drab.1 F! d+ O  o, R- n7 N
  Revision:The brown grass and bare trees form a drab landscape. (转换为前置定语)
2 d6 \- ^% \$ C7 C4 l  The landscape, bare and brown, begged for spring green. (转换为并列结构作后置定语), Y4 r; q' I3 l+ m
  3、作表语用的形容词或名词变为行为动词
3 U+ \# y% X( ]: ~, T  P( J) c; x  例如:
2 g) b# U' u8 A  1) Weak:The team members are good players.  Y# j. }  F+ @) K0 ]6 p3 d
  Revision:The team members play well.- r, h- @, E# C7 e% ^
  2) Weak:One worker's plan is the elimination of tardiness.: H2 t! h* A! O; U. `
  Revision:One worker's plan eliminates tardiness.: w* q! j+ L8 j
  四:不要使用语言过长且累赘的词语
. m  V/ z& U% G9 A: ^; O  b$ E  写作不是用的词汇越高深就越高分,想提高成绩就要用词简单、生动。) Z: P. P; p! [6 p
  例如:
# e/ n0 i! z6 c  1、Wordy:We are in receipt of your letter and intend to follow your recommendations.5 v, [# l4 ^2 {+ z! s. o. X. R, f
  Improved:We have received your letter and intended to follow your recommendation.
( s! \$ d8 Q9 n  2、Wordy:My little sister has a preference for chocolate milk.' z8 J" A2 w* C' M5 n) ^+ {7 A  j
  Improved:My little sister prefers chocolate milk.
+ x. l9 R( `9 h0 l  Z  3、Redundant:We had a serious crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire.% y  h  j) Y: f, E5 u
  Improved:We had a crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire.) u/ K( e' o" N; I
  4、Redundant:My sister and I bought the same, identical dress in different stores.  B8 a' l1 m* S& j% x/ n
  Improved:My sister and I bought the same dress in different stores
* l0 i% i# \! q6 L( I& M- R1 q  雅思IELTS写作用词需要注意的几大要点实例分析
    五:避免陈旧词语或难懂的专业术语
1 |5 F: _) Q6 A/ Q# y# F/ G  雅思是一门语言考试,主要考察烤鸭们的语言运用能力,而写作关键点就在文章的表现力上!! ^/ Q4 i9 O5 {# P% ]8 w
  例如:
+ i5 ~/ \- [) X7 h; y. n  1、Weak:I need her financial input before I can guesstimate our expenditures next fall.
4 a. O( R4 ]7 w. M2 s$ b' V  I need her financial figures before I can estimate our expenditures next fall.
" N" v3 r( y& H- q6 K* Y! T  2、Weak:They will not agree to his proposals in any shape or form.# x9 S0 f6 Y( S4 ]
 
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